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Review:javct says:
Back again!

This story defiantly has great potential, though, I am slightly confused. Are we seeing the lead-up to her being evil or are these flashbacks? Also, why is the first paragraphs in italics? Because it is obvious that one day, Morgana will be evil, but why are seeing her at eleven?

Anyway, I am really enjoying your OC, she is really nice and fits in nicely with the rest of the characters -- some people can write OCs but they just don't fit with the Harry Potter fandom, and I like how yours has. She has just the right amount of... charisma (I think that's the best word for it) to survive Fred and George :P

I can't see anything wrong grammatically; I also cannot see any plotholes which is a good thing!!


Feel free to re-request!
Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Hm.I didn't realize this was confusing, but I suppose I'll have to go back and make it clearer. The main "marketing point", so to say, of the story was her being the next big bad. But the main, eh, emotional ancor is actually her growing into that role as opposed to living it out. There will be flashforwards later on ;) Basically, gonna be one big temoral mess, but maybe I can pull it off, lets see!

I'm glad you think Morgan can survive Fred and George! Makes her a hero already ;)

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