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Review:classicblack says:
What? That's how it's going to end? With Al quesitoning everything he's ever known and wondering if his brother fancies the love of his life?! You can't just end it like that!! I changed my mind: I want you to put the James centric spin off in the queue instead of Everland! And it'd better have an ending where James does not have a thing for Jan and everyone lives happily ever after. Darn it, Helen, now I don't know what to think.

I know, I'm just going to put my faith in the hope that Ginny is completely off the mark and that James doesn't really have a thing for Jan. Then maybe I can live with the ending of this chapter and story and realise how brilliant it really is.

And it really was great. This chapter really tied up the whole book and shed this whole new light on James and Al's relationship. In the beginning of the story, all we got was that they were brothers who bickered and Al was a pushover and James was a troublemaker. But their relationship has matured and now we see how James just loves Al and how he's only a little misguided in some of his actions. Al is the rock that he builds his life on and James is the constant factor that Al can rely on to keep his life normal. It's kind of a crazy, awesome relationship.

I loved the last two words, though! Ah, tradition! :)

Ok, so I've finished this chapter and it's almost two in the morning and I have to work tomorrow. Your stories are far too addicting for their own good. You'll find me in Saving Grace in a few days.
Happy writing,

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