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Review:classicblack says:
Oh Albus, haven't you learned by now not to tell James anything that may give him leverage over you in the future? Geez, I know that and I haven't lived him for the past eighteen years of my life! Crazy kid.

But hooray no unnecessary drama ensued, Al and Jan are being cute and moving in together, James is being hilarious/ a prat, and Ginny is becoming her mother. All in a day's work for a Potter/Weasley (plus Jan).

I do agree with Al, though, drunk Jan is actually sort of amusing when she's not throwing wands at people and/or snogging her future/ current boyfriend's brother. She's just such a silly drunk, it's hilarious.

I loved all the dialogue in this chapter. Sometimes Al's inner-monologuing can grate on the nerves so the absence of it was great. And you're just really good at dialogue so it makes it even better.

I loved at the end when James and Al were exchanging blackmail material. Alas, James won at the end, as he always seems to, and Al takes the brunt of the explosion. Typical.

Awesome chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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