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Review:classicblack says:
Ok, before I actually finish reading chapter: I laughed so loudly (making my Mum think I was thoroughly insane for about the 5th time in my life) when Harry hinted at the (in)famous Ron/Hermione kiss in the middle of the the Battle of Hogwarts! You kill me, Helen...

By the way, why does Al have to be such a teenage boy? Why can't he be a totally unrealistic main character who doesn't go and... interact... with females over his summer holiday. Then it wouldn't have put a giant gap of awkwardness between Jan and Al. Why do you have to be so good at characterization?!

Albus Severus Potter, listen to me. Stop being so oblivious! You fancy Jan and she fancies you (no matter what Helen wrote in this chapter about Jan being over her crush) and you two would make a wonderfully awesome couple. Stop raning on my Albus/Jan parade, Al! I want you two to be a couple!!

Also, it irks me just slightly that Al really doesn't have a spine (or he just really loves his brother). I think it would annoy me more if it didn't make for such hilarious writing whenever James got him into any of his scrapes.

You know, it's good that Al and Jan have to be a couple before the end of this story or I might cry because otherwise Al would never get a girlfriend what with the "bra-sniffing" incident.

Fantastically humorous chapter which made me realise that I'll probably end up staying up all night to finish this story.
Happy writing,
classicblack

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