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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
This is a lovely one-shot. I loved the back and forth bits of the past and present. The scenes between Emmeline and Benjy were cute and good, normal day occurences that made me smie, and made me sad, and even made me laugh once or twice. And the present scenes were heartwrenching, and I think you wrote her loss very well.

This was a really good little story. And I really enjoyed delving into the life of such minor characters, it was very refreshing.


Author's Response: I've always really enjoyed looking into the lives of the other members of the Order and just minor characters in general. There's so much potential there, so much unexplored territory that it's really quite fun and a lot less limiting than writing main characters where we know almost all of the details about their lives.

Emmeline had always been a point of curiosity to me. After all, she's one of the few Order members to be in both incarnations of the group, and when she does die at the start of HBP, it says that her loss was a great one to the Order. And Benjy! Well, he's got blown up, didn't he? How is that not intriguing! But even then I'm just limiting them to their deaths when they are very clearly so much more than that. It's fun to explore the potential.

Thank you so much for your review! It brought the biggest smile to my face.

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