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Review:daretodream says:
FIRST! YES.

So, I love the pairing of Lily with one of the Scamander twins and I was so excited when I saw that but the true excitement didn't come until after I had clicked into it because oh my gosh it was lovely.

I love the rivalry. I feel like twins can go one way or another, so close (Fred and George) or rivals, constantly competing for attention, or in this case, a girl.

And Luna's son is a snake and who would have ever expected that because I certainly wouldn't have! The poor boy who doesn't fit in but makes so many excellent points, now doesn't he?

Because though in some ways he is his own person, he's often treated like he isn't. And I can't help but feel badly for him, tucked away in the shadowes, feelings unimportant and not as special as his brother when really he has just as many wonderful qualities I'm sure.

My favorite line was at the beginning when it said that Lily smiled at him but he didn't notice and he would have been sorry had he known. I don't know, something about that line struck me, it really did.

I also loved the scene jumps! I found the bit about the laundry rather humorous, and at the same time rather typical of a teenaged boy. And then he had to wear the sweater to Hogsmeade. His mother really does love him, doesn't she? And as she always has, Luna means well.

I loved the end, when he listed all of th ways that he is different from his brother. It helped me to truly see him, to see who he was and who he wanted to be and it helped me to appreciate his crush on Lily even more.

And then she smiled at him. And it seemed the perfect ending to this piece, it really did.

You did a magnificent job with this piece, not only with capturing your quote but just overall. 10/10

~Cassie

Author's Response: Awww Cassie

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