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Review:EverDiggory says:
Finally here!

Woo! This was really busy, there was so much happening it took me awhile to sort through all this!

I was really excited when I realized this was a Lucius/Narcissa, but I don't think it will really be a focus point since this is more of a detective story!

I'm not going to be able to use the usual set-up, so if I ramble, I apologize.

So, I realize you were worried about how you wrote this style. I think you can put those worries to rest because I think you did wonderful. The whole chapter was very eery and quite creepy. I shivered once or twice so I wouldn't be too uptight anymore;P I think you did quite a good job.

The characterization is definitely tricky with such a large amount of characters! I think what you had will suffice, but I do think that in the next chapters you should probably work on it! I really do think that you had a good amount for the first chapter, so I wouldn't sweat it!

I think the plot is terribly interesting! You really captured my interest and I was on the edge of my seat till the very end. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

I really like this and it is so, so interesting. I love how all the characters are connected! I think this is a great start to whats sure to be a wonderful story!

I don't really no what else to say, to be honest. Thats really all you mentioned in the areas of concern, but next time (and I do hope you rerequest) if you'd like me to elaborate on more subjects, I'd be happy to do so!

xx

Ever

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