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Review:Jchrissy says:
What an intense prologue!! It really got me interested on who these people are and what this legion is all about. I love being throwin into a story like you did here, I really created a sense if urgency.

And of course now I really want to find out how and when out cast of hp characters will get wrapped up in this group.

I think you really did a great job making Aron a complex character in such a small amount of words. We learn he's caring behind his tough exterior, and that hi feelings for Kara go much past thinking shed be a suitable wife, but that he truly does love her.

Awesome start, I'm excited to see what happens next!

Author's Response: I'm glad it got you interested and that you felt the urgency. Thanks for reviewing and glad you enjoyed it!

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