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Review:peppersweet says:
this story

just makes me go


it's satirical and witty and so aware - but at the same time, if you remove all that, it's still a chuffing good read with - yes - some chuffing good snogging. okay sorry, that basically lowered the tone by about fifteen fathoms...but. I like the balance you've got going on here.

Appy is, wow.

Great-Aunt Rita always said she would take me to the Prophet headquarters, but let's face it: the woman is much better at being a liar than an aunt. - STILL MY FAVOURITE LINE OF THIS CHAPTER OMG

saves trees? appy save a tree and go jump off a log. wait that doesn't make much sense.

jsyk, I'm so quirky for chocolate right now I can't even. (please say you watch New Girl for appy inspiration?)

also - we both already know how perfect that little passage is about the cult of quirk. girls and girldom, will any of us ever really shake it off? mini rant on the side: sure, I'm hardly perfect in my own characterisation, but in fanfiction, it rarely ever seems that boys are human. buuut this is not the place for discussing such matters and I shall return to the chapter.

cough cough WHO WATCHES THE WATCHMEN cough

Big Bertha and her big... berth. - snorted so hard at this

yes, Albus...fancy seeing you here. in the girls' loos.

you wrote in the brogues. eeeheee. evil lizard albus with his brogues and his sharp suit.

Scorpius is as eloquent as a cat yowling on a fence. - cue another PFFFT of laughter from me

omg clemence and albus - omg - omg -

like I wish I could say something meaningful and eloquent about that little passage, but it just sort of floored me. the 'fusing shrapnel' bit especially.

omg editing drinking party brb dying, we need to play this on skype some day

ANYWAY. brilliant chapter, like so brilliant - I loved it so much! it's getting so...hmm, dark? kind of dark and a bit edgy. this chapter actually made me feel really tense. so whatever you've got lined up in future...

Author's Response: YOU make me go asjldghagahlgkngka -keyboard smash break dance interlude- adnksdfnakfdb.

And thus the eternal question: is etc. social commentary with snogging or snogging with social commentary? hehehehe.


I do not actually watch New Girl, but I think imagining Zooey Deschanel's big eyes is enough of a muse.

this is because all boys are actually daleks.

Heee yes brogues. MAN SHOES. I wish I had a pocket Julia whenever I wrote, whispering British words whenever I need it and warbling "Tea, tea, tea" when off-duty. Okay wow that was creepy.

♥ I wanted to make a hot one-line snog :3

ALSO YES wait no it's not legal for me yet ahem hem julia. drat you, brits.

It's getting dark and edgy like obsidian dice~ lbr julia, I have no idea what I've got lined up for the future, but I am more excited than ever before so! ♥ ♥ ♥ :3

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