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Review:True Author says:
Hello! I'm True Author with your requested review. =]
Usually I don't like short summaries, but I must say that "come and dance" is a perfect summary I ever saw! I am so impressed by it. honestly. its catchy and has something to do with the plot.
The second thing is, you've tried to write your story in a diffrent form. in present tense. that actually makes the story better.
There are a few small but barely noticeable grammar mistakes, still just fix them by yourself, they are not very hard to fix! write dialouges in inverted commas, because readers may think they are thoughts.
Otherwise a cute romantic story. =]
True Author

Author's Response: Hello!

Thankyou for your review! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story and I'm really pleased that the writing of it in the present tense comes off! I'm also glad you liked the summary- I wasn't too sure about it myself so it's good that you thought it worked!

Thanks for pointing out the grammar errors- I'll have a read through and try and pick them up. The reason I wrote the dialogue italics rather than inverted commas was because I was trying to achieve a sort of dreamy effect but if it just makes it confusing, maybe I was wrong.

Thankyou again for taking the time to review :)
- Bethany

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