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Review:ataxaphobia says:
I'm really enjoying this story! And it makes me extra excited now that the action is picking up and more information is being revealed.

One little thing I would like to point out is that sometimes you forget to add the contraction part to a word (like saying "should" instead of "shouldn't"). I sometimes get confused and have to reread a sentence a couple of times until I realized what's up.
Also, you should pay attention to your uses of "though" and "thought." Haha that one little 't' at the end can get ya.

But please! Update soon! I'm ready to read more.

Author's Response: Hi there.
Im so glad that you like the story and thank you for not giving up on it, despite my inconstant updates. The story is definitely going to pick up from now, and hopefully, Im going to be good with the action thing... still shivering when i think about it ;P
I'm so sorry about the grammar and typos, I know it's not my forte. I always edit the chapters myself, but once Im finished writing one, i just can't sti still until i post it - so the editing comes afterwards. It's impractical i know, and the errors detract from the story, but one of my many faults is impatience...
Yeah, the 't-s' are always squirmish arounud me :D

I'm writing the new chapter as we speak, and hopefully, you're gonna love it. Im keeping my fingers crosssed! X_X

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