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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Ooh, I really liked this! :D You definitely did have a hard phobia to write about but I thought you did a really good job with it(:

I loved Al and Ria's relationship! I could tell they liked each other as the story went on and I kept rooting for them the whole way through ;)

I'm glad you had the story end where she was finally getting over her fear, yet not quite over it completely. It would've seemed very unrealistic if she got over it that quickly so I liked how it implied that it's gonna take time before she officially and finally gets over it. :D

Nice job! And good luck in the challenge(:

-Amanda

Author's Response: Yay! I was really worried that I didn't write it well enough! I was originally going to make it a humour fic but as I researched it I had this plunny and I thought it was much better! :)
I didn't even plan on making them get together, actually! As I was writing I was like I will not ship them. I will not ship them.
But when I re-read it I was like I SHIP THEM! :p
Yeah, I didn't want to make it completely unrealistic because when I was researching it, websites said it took years to get over the phobia.
I'm so glad you liked it! :)
Thanks for reviewing! :D


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