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Review:daretodream says:
Poor, poor Louis. And Freya too, of course.

I liked your different take on this. Both of your characters are aware of the fact that their own recklessness brought this on themselves. They weren't under the influence of something or misled in any way, they were teenagers, and sometimes teenagers do stupid things.

I also love that the first thing that Louis thought of to do would be go to their parents for help. I understand why Freya is scared, but it really showed maturity that that is how Louis decided they should solve this problem. Maturity that could really help them out in the long run.

But Bill definitely knows something is up. I wonder how long it will be before Louis tells him. I mean, this is the sort of thing you can really only keep to yourself for so long before you're bursting at the seams, having to tell someone. I'm interested to see who that someone will be.

Good first chapter!

~Cassie

Author's Response: I am so so sorry that I haven't replied to this lovely review until now.
I'm so glad that you liked how I wrote Louis and Freya, I wanted Louis to be the good guy in this story, the sensible one.
Oh yeah Bill does know something is up, it won't be long until he finds out whats happened.
Thank you so much for your review!


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