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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
I love you for quoting The Princess Bride. When I read that line, that's immediately what my mind jumped to. I absolutely love that book/movie.

This is going to be incredibly difficult to say, but Albus and Clemence were... almost... sweet. Sweet! Well, Albus was, but Clemence wasn't quite so cynically heartless... so I suppose that would be "sweet" for her. Either way, they were all cute and stuff.

Appy is SO CREEPY. I am seriously disturbed right now. Like... what? She was sitting on Clemence. Sitting on her. Holding scissors. SCISSORS. So creepy.

I love this story. I really do. It's so fascinating and it has all sorts of elements to it. You definitely deserve those Dobby nominations!

-Laura

Author's Response: Everyone I know seems rather meh about the Princess Bride, as was I when I was younger, but I have come to fully appreciate it fully ♥

Hee, can I love that it was difficult? This chapter, actually, was super difficult x__x It's so weird writing so much emotion in a fic that's been void of it, with a narrator who resists it. It depended a lot on Clemence, since it /is/ her point of view, so what I've been trying to build up to is her gradually facing the emotions and consequences of herself and the people around her. And what came out was... weirdly sweet! Albus finally sees that Clemence can be hurt, and I think that's something she's forgotten about herself, too.

lolol and yes, Appy is creepy. That will never change. 8D

♥ thank you so much! ^__^


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