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Review:Remus says:
Perelandra here with your review swap! I almost started reading 'With All Things' but this was the one that really piqued my interest. I'm always up for a murder mystery story!

I absolutely loved the beginning portion. I love detail and imagery. It felt like I was there and an accomplice to the crime even though I have no idea who did it! It was great to see a story that had a great balance between imagery and dialogue. I'm intrigued! Who is the murderer?! The way James came home it made me think that it was him, but then again Teddy doesn't seem like a nice guy here either with Victoire. Only Roxanne seems to be the innocent one! However, I could be totally wrong and its not one of them.

The flow was great! I didn't found myself scrolling down trying to finish it quick as possible. In fact, I want to read more of what happens and who the real killer is! I'm favoring this and reading more when I have some free time.

Thanks for the swap! You'll be seeing more of me as I r/r this! :D


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