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Review:Remus says:
Perelandra here from the forums with your review swap! I'm a sucker for Shakespeare and when I saw this one I had to read it.

In my English class, we only watched Kenneth Branagh's Hamlet, never read it. However, that was almost 10 years ago so the details escape me. Which I'm glad because that way I won't know what is going to happen.

Plotwise: This was a very interesting start. I'm starting to wonder who killed Lucius since he has no brother. Unless you give him one. Haha! The one I'm interested to read about is Ophelia and who you're going to cast as her. I can't really comment much on it since its only the first chapter.

Grammar and punctuation: I found a couple of mistakes. For example, you misspell Constellations. There were some parts that needed commas while in others you needed to trade the commas for a full stop. Maybe one more quick read through and you'll see where you'll naturally break or fully stop if you were reading out loud.

I absolutely love the imagery and setting. I'm a detail oriented person and unless the author gives me a setting and description, I'm going to imagine everything in a black room. You managed to put me in that Denmark castle along with Dobby and Blaise.

Anyway! I believe that's it! I'm curious as to who is going to be who in this story! :D Thanks for the swap and a good read!

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing! :)
I'm going to re-quest a beta for this once my other story has picked one up so hopefully the mistakes will vanish.
I'm glad you liked it though and that you felt like you were there!
Thanks again for reviewing! :)


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