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Review:classicblack says:
You know, I think I appreaciate your humor so much because I'm rubbish at writing humor and you're a lot better than me. But I disgress...

I loved this chapter! Honestly, it's so hilarious that James comes up with all these elaborate schemes and then Al agrees with him because he's a bit of a pushover. Then Al gets in trouble/ does not benefit from it and James gets off scot free and/or benefits. Such as James getting an O in Defence and Al spending the night throwing up in the toilet and having his nails painted pink. Poor Albus! I do agree with the story summary that Al might just die prematurely because of James!

I like how you keep adding certain parts to the story- like Jan saying words her mother wouldn't approve and the "Stupid *insert word that's not 12+ here*" ending to every chapter. It's great! And it ties the story/ chapters together.

I think I gagged a little when Al's hair flew off and suddenly had the terrible mental image of my hair being tossed back and forth by my best friend. Freaky.

I do agree with Albus and James- Lily is too young to have a boyfriend!

Awesome chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

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