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Review:lilypotterfan123 says:
Mike! Such an interesting beginning already I love it. Teddy seems like such an awesome character, willing to take a risk in life and in a way now he's paying the price as he's been bitten. Bit of a silly lad but oh well, I'm sure you'll find a way for Teddy to have fun. Hopefully!

This is actually a nice refreshing change from what I usually read Mike, and it seems like already you're having lots of fun writing it so I'm glad your shameless self promoting brought me here!

To improve maybe you could have more of a descriptive beginning and some explanations behind the new inventions allowing them to go back in time? Just try and go into a bit more detail because I was really interested and making it up in my head isn't as reassuring when you have a definite answer, you know?

Other than that everything else was good, I particularly liked the Uncle Harry touch. I mean Harry only called his godfather by his first name but it already shows they both care for each other a lot!

A really nice beginning to what I hope will become an epic tale of werewolf-ism and maybe we'll see Fennell somewhere!

Bex

Author's Response: Thanks Bex! Glad you liked the beginning! Teddy is quite fun to write and I'm enjoying his character as well xD He shall sometime :D

WOO! Shameless self promotion pros! xD Woop woop! :D

Hmm, yeah I should go edit that a bit. I will sometime :D

Glad you liked that touch! Not sure what compelled me to write that but it happened! Glad it worked out :D

You'll see FenRIR in there :p

Thanks Bex!

-Mike.


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