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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
"who's apparently had a love of Dolls Houses the surpassed the actual space in her flat" - what is this meant to say, or am I just being strange?

"We've can talk to the sister this afternoon" - we, yes?

"Vincent suspected he'd be hearing in awful lot" - an?

"I could all by relevant" - it and be?

"And our Wendy has been buying more Dolls Houses since her sister died" - little confused. Sister isn't dead.

Oh, I feel all critique-y and stuff. And telling you? That's just odd... :P

...Anyway, I loved this so much, Helen! You've already pulled me in, I'm very intrigued. Vincent seems like an interesting character, as does Brandon; I look forward to reading more of them as the story progresses. I don't read many Cho fics, but I'm liking her character in this. She's matured a lot after Hogwarts and Cedric. Still having nightmares; sad.

I can't wait for her to meet Vincent. :)

Brilliant. I love murder mysteries. I suggest just reading through it again, but it's amazing.


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