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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
OMG!!! SO MUCH! *brain explodes*

WOW...Al to the rescue. And he loves her, I know. So much that he's conflicted as to whether he'd choose her or his plan. But he'd choose her in the end. And then, because she loves him too, she'd say "keep the plan" and they'll destroy the group and rule the world together! :D

...Yes. That is true. ;)


This feud between Rose and Dom really is getting out of hand, I'm actually a little scared for Scorpius and Clemence and, well, the world around them... :P I hope the idea to print the note from Rose is a good idea...

Loved this and I really cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm so excited with how things are going with Al and Clemence and I look forward to knowing how the story continues. I'm so excited.


Author's Response: BIG WOW 8D

I wrote his conflict with the idea that Clemence will never believe he cares about her until he puts her above his plans. So the hesitation is more like, 'you don't care enough', rather than 'you might care' - but I actually love the way you read it, because I also wanted to show the weird intensity of their affair. So many conflicting interests D: and baaahaha, rule the world together - that seems to be the suggestion I get from everyone xD you are not alone.

Thank you so much for reading! ^__^

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