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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Oh, oh, oh. There goes the goose bumps, and I definately do not think it's from the ceiling fan in my bedroom that I've put on high.

This was...chilling. Chilling good, and you've written this at 3 AM?!? Oh how I'd kill to have a functional brain like that at 3 in the morning. Usually I'll be snorting in laughter, saying things incoherently, so I never dare try.

The darkness to it, and the vaguey-ness. It's great! It leaves a lot of room for the reader to fill in gaps for themselves. And not those annoying gaps like potholes you find at horribly paved roads, but gaps that actually make you a puzzle. (Am I making any sense?)

Strangely enough, I like your Dom. She's a decieving little ginger ain't she? And Teddy! Oh how bad I feel for Victoire! I'm guessing he left her for Dom, but then...she ran away(?) Or perhaps I got it all wrong?

Anyway, this was a great fic! Can you provide another one like this, when you can. For something you claim to have never tried before, you're awfully good at writting it!

Author's Response: Blistering heat too, amirite ;A;

I am way too productive at 3am :P I wish I could be productive at more reasonable hours but my brain does not work like that. And apparently my brain told me LET'S NOT USE PROPER NOUNS for nearly the entire duration of this fic. Even when I read it, I have to read this very slowly so I figure out which 'she' is referencing which sister.

You got it just about right, the way I intended! Left Victoire for Dom, but Dom rejects him when he does so. Ended up a bit more er, violent than that though, heh.

I write a lot of my oneshots spontaneously, mostly because I don't have the muse for very long (nor the attention span). It comes and goes, but I reread it after getting this review and I hope I can write something like this soon ^__^

thank you so so much again!

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