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Review:ChaosWednesday says:
hey there, it's Whiskey from Review Tag :D

So many things about this story make me like it: 1) the Blacks, I love the Blacks and its diffcult to come accross a stroy where they are not some cardboard villains. 2) Agatha Christie style detective story (!), that will NEVER get old ever 3) good character development and style, of course, also a major plus.

I loved how you honoured the detective genre. Secret conversations in dark rooms, suspicious glances, hints and red herrings...the mood is, on the one hand, very familiar, on the other hand still exciting.

I liked how you singled out Bellatrix, forcing the reader to become suspicious, then to realize that it can't be so easy, and then to start coming up with crazy theories of their own. Making the reader think, good for you ;)

I also enjoyed how you started not with the death, but with the immediate aftermath. This way, you managed to address the irreversibility and heaviness of death instead of releshing in the shock factor.

I'm very fond of character-focused stories, and this seems to be all about the relationships between the family members. I am really curious to see how you will interpret the Blacks and I want to get to know them just as much as I want to know WHO DONE IT (seriously, I need to know. gah, hooked again -.-).

Also, I suspect the motivation for the murder will be more than just money, since heirlooms were mentioned ;) Old magical objects are the best! I hope they play a vital role later on.

Basically, good job and I'll probably keep reading this one! Although some sentences were odd and the pace may appear too drawn out at times, you have something very promising here, go you!

9/10

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