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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
This chapter was everything I wanted it to be and more: it was funny at times, heartbreaking at others, and then so exciting at the end! A nervous kind of exciting, of course, but exciting nonetheless! What a way to end the chapter!

Vernon was, of course, the worst sort of person. I was amused by his reactions to James, though.

Now that Lily and Petunia have had their falling out, I wonder what's going to happen with everything between them.

And mostly, I wonder what's going on at the pub! I know Sirius said it was a riot, but I wanna see it in action!

Great job!

Author's Response: Ooh, I'm so glad you liked this chapter! It was actually difficult to weave together all the Pottermore information about this dinner--the subjects were related, but not exactly easy to travel between in casual conversation. I have to admit that I rather enjoyed some of my silly little Vernon-dialogue. :P (Hey, if you can't amuse yourself in this world, you're in trouble, right?)

Lily and Petunia's relationship always strikes me as quite odd. I don't think they hated each other, and this isn't going to destroy their relationship entirely...however, it is going to have some repercussions that will surface later in the story. And last night, I somehow realized that I have written ANOTHER wedding into the plot of one of these stories, completely unintentionally. So you'll see that in a later chapter!

Cliffhanger! :D Thanks again for reviewing!


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