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Review:classicblack says:
Oh hai Helen. Nice to read you again (wow that sounds creepy, doesn't it?). I bet you thought I'd given up. I bet you thought (or hoped) that I went back on my threat of reviewing everything and that you'd be rid of me. Well you were wrong. Sorry. I'm back!! So here goes...

Ahahahaha this was just hilarious. Hilariously hilarious. Can you write a book on how to write good humor? Because I'd definitely buy a copy.

I love that Scorp and Al aren't best friends! So refreshingly new, although part of me hopes that they'll become friends and that Jan and Al will be a couple (seriously it's like the only things in my brain are cliches *sighs*).

I do want to ask why James, being older than Albus, is in his Potions class. Is James really that unintelligent that he can't be in his own year's Potions class?

I seriously love James character. He's perfectly arrogant and prattish like James Potter I but he's really different than the James I in TAOS. It's crazy how weirdly good you are at characterization.

I also love all the little phrases you give Al (like in the first paragraph how he couldn't "give a hippogriff"). It's definitely something that helps define Al.

Awesome chapter! I love humor and you've definitely got it. And it's nice that this isn't a super long story (so it won't take me long to read it and move on to the next one. I can hear you groaning).
Happy writing,
classicblack

P.S. Are the chapter titles a reference to Friends? Because if so, you're awesome (but I'm pretty sure you already knew that)

P.S.S. Now that I've started religously reading/ reviewing again can you update some of my favorite stories?

Author's Response: Heylooo there m'dear! Lovely to hear from you again. Although, of course I had complete faith in you (and I'm still waayy overwhelmed by all your other beautiful reviews).

Write a book on writing humour? Pah. Well, that would be quite the undertaking. Mostly I just write things that I find vaguely funny and hope that I'm not the only one. Although the humour in this is entirely different to the humour in other stories so eh... I'm still not entirely convinced humour is my forte.

Oh James just snuck in for the sake of being an idiot. He's not entirely that bad at potions (although he's honestly not that great when I think about it). But, yeah! This one's by far my shortest novel length so it shouldn't take you too long to get through it.

They are indeed references to friends.

And which did you want an update on? I have a new story in the queue, then Saving Grace after that and then after that it's all after you (I've posted on your wall over on the forums telling you this also).

-AC


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