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Review:SilentConfession says:
I've been wanting to pop over and read this story for ages. The pairing strangely intrigued me and i wanted to see how you would handle it.

I like how you've started this from what i presume to be the end. It's a structure i really enjoy reading. I also like how you've begun it at this moment of really intense and high emotion. Where we've learned that Victor's life seems to keep getting worse. There is that word Redemption and i'm curious to know what happened (her?) that brought him out of his downward spiral.

In any case, you've opened strongly and brought in a lot of interesting questions that make me want to read more to find answers to them. The story really is intriguing and I love the description and your general tone for this chapter. It has this dark, mad way about it that really gets under the skin. I'm really curious to know where he actually is... his is in a madhouse? In a criminally insane prison? The man in the suit seems too brusque and harsh to be any kind of doctor and it makes me wonder, is Victor actually mad?

So yes, tons of questions and I personally think that's a great way to start a story and your attention to details were great and made this story come alive for me. It's also interesting that you chose Rose, the daughter of someone he dated ages ago. I suppose that adds to the horrible scandal of it all! Anyway, great start and i'm really interested to see where this goes!
-zayne

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking a look and taking the time to leave a review!

I'm glad you found the chapter to be a bit intriguing. That was definitely my intention when I sat down to write it. As more time has passed and I've gotten further into the story, I'm not sure anymore how well the prologue reflects the tone of the chapters to follow, but you're right, it is pretty much the end of the story -- the question being not where does the story go but how did it get to this point.

And it's true, I guess, about the scandal. That honestly wasn't my main motivation for picking the pair, but I guess it's really hard to avoid. I was much more drawn to what Ron would think than Hermione!

Thank you again for the review. If you read on, I hope you enjoy!


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