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Review:AdeleShare says:
I'm not sure what I expected when I clicked the link to this story, but it was definatley not this. The request mentioned Rose/Scop, so I'm confused right now as to how this story is going to connect with them, but it's intriguing! I was very impressed with how this is written. Were you imagining the Perverell's from Victorian Era? Because that's how I read it. I can't remember if it is mentioned in HP. I know Hermione finds Ignotus' grave, but I can't remember what it said.

I think I am as curious about little Anastsia as Ignotus is! What kind of condition does she have? I hope we learn more about her later.

I feel that you did a great job with the flow and characters. The dialouge seemed a little 'stiff' in some places, but that made it feel Victorian. So if that's the era you were going for, then it worked :D

I would love to read some more, so please feel free to re-request :D

~AdeleShare

Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you so much for stopping by with such a lovely review!

Now, I know that things may seem a little foggy considering the characters introduced in this chapter and the ones mentioned in the story's info box, but I promise they get cleared up eventually. I am glad to hear you found this intriguing though; you have no idea how happy that makes me!

And well, it's not exactly Victorian. Research has informed me that the Peverell family was a respectable and famous medieval family. So it goes a few hundred years prior to the Victorian era. I know the language may not represent such a fact, but I really didn't fancy using 'thou's and 'thee's and didn't think many people would fancy reading much of that either. But the historical-ish feel was purposefully included and I'm happy you've noticed it.

Anyway, thanks again for the review! It's always good to hear different opinions regarding this story because I really do want it to work out. And thank you for offering!

-Manno


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