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Review:pennyardelle says:
You are so great at writing little kids and parents, which I assume is borne out of experience. It comes off as so natural (and so entertaining). I really like how Rose is so completely herself still, despite being a mother now. It wouldn't have been as fun if motherhood had completely mellowed her out and made her want to quit doing all of the crazy stuff she does. :P

I have to admit, I kind of wish Rose and Scorpius would take one of the Lupins with them--not for their sake, but just for how funny it would be!

Great work so far; I'm loving it, as usual.

Author's Response: I think I enjoy writing the Lupin kids way too much. It was fun to let little Dora show her stuff, now she's old enough to have her personality more in place. Ramses popped into my head in his scene with Johnny Lupin ("I've taught him to heel!"), and I had to give Rose a baby. Just so that scene could be in here. Because Johnny Lupin needed a minion. haha. Just kidding.

Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you like the story :)



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