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Review:Jchrissy says:
I'm so angry at myself for not reviewing this the first time. Because NOW I had to be attacked with feels all over again. Bah. Did you cry while you were writing this? I feel like there's so much emotion done so perfectly, placed in just the right format and at the absolutely perfect (I know how much I've already used that word, but nothing else can describe it) degree, you had to have cried while writing it.

The understanding that George has in regards to the times he's seen his father cry tells so much about his feelings for Angelina. You have no idea how much I love you right now for writing this story with two characters that do survive and end up getting their happily ever after, because I seriously could not handle one of these two dying, haha.

And now you've ended this very moving chapter with quite a hint of mistery. So he has to be Zonko of Zonko's joke shop, right?

Melissa... I have to know what comes next. I think you need to fake sick until chapter 14 is finished ;)
And if you haven't noticed by now... IPhone review ;)

Author's Response: Baww!! I'm so happy to see this review. I'm getting ready to take an exam that I'm not nearly ready to take, and this was just the perfect thing to cheer me up. :) There are a lot of emotions in this chapter... nostalgia, grief, self-frustration... that it was very difficult to write. But, I can say that I didn't cry writing it. I was very brave -- I did write everthing from the start of the memorial ceremony onward in one sitting. :P

The comparison between George and Angelina and molly/arthur was something that my brain produced and I just sat back and was like, "huh... where did that even come from?" but I am really proud of it. I think people learn a lot about relationships from their parents in one way or another, and so George relating he and Angelina to his parents is an important step.

Annnd Yes. I can say that Mr. Garfield Zonko is of the Zonko jokeshop family... and that's all I can say right now. :P

I'm hoping to be able to take some time this weekend to work on the next chapter, and with any luck, I'll finish it up. :) (though it's an Ang chapter, so we won't be getting back to George's story line until chapter 15!)

Thank you so much for this review!


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