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Review:Gaius Scipio says:
Hmmm the descriptions, especially in the fashion area were really well done, but the characters seemed to lack substance. They were just a bit too fluffy for me. I also felt that your portrayal of Bellatrix was too simple. Bellatrix would have probably killed half the people in the room or at least died trying rather than let anyone take her to a dungeon. Additionally I don't think that Lord Voldemort would have let some jumped up "mudblood" (new member of the Malfoy or no), incarcerate his most loyal follower. Don't get me wrong it wasn't badly written, it's just that the characters seem a trifle too far removed from the canon.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I read back the chapter and I understand what you mean, for me this chapter was a struggle to write as is the one i am currently writing but hopefully I am improving! I will 100% take your comment into concideration and think about giving the supporting characters some more depth. thanks again! :)

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