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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
Back again already, you say? Why, yes I am!

As always, this was a great chapter. I thought there was a good flow to it. In particular, I enjoyed seeing Helga interact with one of her students. And don't get me started on how much I enjoyed the Helga/Salazar moment in there. Just enough tension that I was waiting for something, anything, to happen and it didn't. If I didn't know this romance, for want of a better word, would be a long one, I'd be disappointed but at this point, it's really great build-up, the first stepping stone of many to come. I'm excited to see what their future will hold!

As far as Helga's fear goes, I think it's very believable especially for a woman in her time. In a world where men dictate how everything goes, it's only natural that she fears a gilded cage. I fear it too, and I wasn't even born in that time! Haha. I'm actually a little claustrophobic myself so I thought it was very realistic.

And Salazar? He was fantastic as per usual. I do think it's plausible that he's capable of warmth and compassion. How else would he have been such great friends with all of the Founders if he wasn't?

Overall, lovely job you've done here!

- Molly

Author's Response: Hey Molly! It's great to see you back :)

I'm really glad you liked this one! It was fun to write Helga in teacher mode; I can just see her being a compassionate motherly figure to her students. And I don't want the Helgazar situation to move too slowly, but I do also want to build things up a little before anything big happens. I'm glad it's not too boring yet (but if it does get tedious to read, please let me know :P)

You know, I never really thought of Helga's fear that way, but it makes so much sense for her to fear being ruled by a man. I just pictured her as claustrophobic, but that's such a cool way of looking at it! And I'm glad you thought Salazar's softer side was believable here :)

Thanks for coming by! I'll re-request as soon as I can :)

--Maggie

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