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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
Sorry for the delay but here I am with your requested review!

I thought the simplicity of this fic definitely helped with the overall tone. It wasn't saturated with vivid descriptions of horrific wounds, but I understood that whoever the narrator was (I myself imagined Bill after he was attacked) maimed and had terrible scars as a result.

The flow and the grammar were fine. I do think that while you did a great job keeping it simple and clean and, more to the point, effective, I would've loved if you took it a little darker. Pushed it one step further and really delved into the horror of it all rather than detailing the healers. Of course, that's just a personal preference and even that's not the right word for it as it's mainly a suggestion.

Otherwise, this was a really great read! :)

Author's Response: What delay? It took you like three hours, that's no delay! :p
Ooh, Bill! Heaps of people have different ideas, I love hearing them! :p
I'm glad that the simplicity thing worked, I didn't want to go into too much detail but I was scared that it wasn't enough!
I'm glad about the flow and grammar, I was really worried about that. Hmm, I'll look into changing it and see if it works. :)
Thank you so much for taking the time to review this! I really appreciate it. :)

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