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Review:daretodream says:
Hi! I'm daretodream from the forums, here with your requested review.

I think you have a good idea for a story here. I've always wondered what exactly had happened during the year that Harry was gone, and it is interesting to see the different adaptions that people come up with.

I also think that you got a lot of the aspects of Ginny's character down pretty well. You have her characterized as a strong, resilient girl, which she certainly is. And the tidbit at the end is so sad, because you know that she really can't bear the thought of losing Harry, and it is distinctly possible that she will.

The other thing that struck me as tragic was Neville mentioning that Ginny's mother would like her in the Great Hall as soon as possible. Knowing what that's about, I can't help but feel sympathy for her.

Keep writing!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Thank-you very much for the kind review and for not pointing out any mistakes that I've made it meant a lot to hear everything that you said. I was orginially going to make the Ginny know that Fred was dead but I thought i'd keep it a secret, because the readers obviously know what it is, i'm glad that came across.
Thanks again
- kjp :D


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