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Review:padmoonyfoot7 says:
Lily is a werewolf! Oh good Merlin! Well that was a surprise, but it really fits when you read back. Richie - NO! I am quite sad about this, because I don't think he really knew what was going on when he was being taken. And the whole limping away part made me really feel bad for him.

Rose froze up a lot. And who is the Murderer Upstairs - the Upstairs Murderer? I'm trying to remember who was upstairs. But anyway. Scorpius was great in this, and I think you showed his pain very well. He didn't break out in sobs, but he did cry, because of the tears, and I'm glad you put that in.
So all in all this chapter was pretty amazing, and Lily being a werewolf gives her character more depth.
Awesome chapter!
Keep up the good work!!
I had more to write, but I can't remember, because I'm trying to solve the mystery of the Upstairs Murderer. I will have more to say in the next review.

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

xoxo

Author's Response: I'm glad it wasn't too out of the blue and surprising :D but I'm glad you are surprised, too!

Oh yeah, I'm really sorry about Richie too. Someone had to go, and I am sorry it was him. Rose froze up because this was the first time that the real consequences of this fight hit home, in front of her eyes. Before Richie (and the Upstairs Murderer) everything bad had been worked out, and ended up fine. I needed a tragedy! And the people upstairs were Albus, James and Lysander. So, it was one of them. XD

I'm glad you liked how I presented Scorpius, because I wanted to show him breaking down in his own way as well. He'd known Richie for a very long time, and it was the equivalent to a family member being murdered.

Thanks so much for reviewing :)


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