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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh this was another really sweet chapter! I like that how dispite it being a very tough moment to be Remus, he still loves and wants to protect his friends and realizes that everyone can make stupid mistakes. I thought the ending with Lily was a really nice way to end this chapter, a little bit of a rainbow after a cloudy rainy day. I also like how her talking with Remus kind of sets up her way of thinking that maybe James isn't so bad after all. Especially since he was the one to first figure it out and also the one to make the others swear to not tell! I found a couple of mistakes, more towards the end of the story than the beginning. In one instance, you missed the letter k for the word ask so instead it says as and then in another place, i think you say if i had gotten away, and I think here its meant to say if I had gotten away with it or if i had gotten my way.. as saying away in that sentence doesn't quite make sense. Altogether though, this was a reallly enjoyable chapter and I thought you did a wonderful job with it!


Author's Response: Heya! First of, sorry for the late review respond! I would've been here earlier but I've been distracted by other stories. Haha! I've finally made it, though!

Remus definitely loves his friends/pack members but at this point he's mad that Sirius almost broke that trust he has. He's afraid at lashing out at Sirius, though, because they're his friends and friends are everything for him, specially when he grew up rather lonely.

And the Lily-Remus conversation was fun and difficult to write. It was hard trying to keep this from becoming a Remus/Lily shipping story when I was trying to only show the friendship they have.

I'll do another read through to find those mistakes and I'll go ahead and fix the ones you mentioned.

Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed this! :D Thank you for the review swap!


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