Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:RosieQueen says:
It's Rosie with your requested review! :)

Wow...this was such a powerful piece! Just a one-shot, but it was very emotional and complex! I don't think I could ever write anything like this. The way you managed to enter Rose's thoughts was perfect. The detail shows a lot of hard work, too.

I particularly enjoyed Rose's characterization. I thought her jealousy towards her more popular cousin was conveyed perfectly. And Lily's characterization was wonderfully done too--she seemed a bit naive, unaware of her cousin's feelings.

And the quote you used from the challenge fit very well into the story. :)

Overall, this was a very enjoyable piece. I adore your writing style so much! Keep on writing! :D

~Rosie

Author's Response: Hi Rosie! Thanks for stopping by! :)

I'm so happy that you liked the detail and my attempt to get into Rose's head. Working on character development is one of the things I enjoy most about writing fanfiction, and it's great to hear that you view it as a strength.

It's also lovely to hear that you liked my characterization of both Rose and Lily. I meant for Rose's dark jealousy to be a sort of contrast to Lily's naivety, although both of them share a too-close connection to Scorpius. It just looks different for each girl.

Thanks again for this very sweet review :)

-Amanda

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net