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Review:Calypso says:
Oh wow!
I love your description of their love letters. It was so sweet, and hers made a perfect start to chapter- it did made me laugh!

You built up the tension beautifully with her anxiety about what her mother was going to say. The whole part about Andromeda fearing her smile was wonderfully done- I loved the simile of her being like a vulture, I think it was.
I really love how you've subtly characterised their mother- details like the brandy glass, the way she's pacing instead of sitting etc. really give the reader an idea of how she is viewed by her children.

And then the drama of Lucius' proposal! It was such a good scene because there was Andromeda's reaction and Cissy's reaction and their mother's reaction all at odds with each other. And I loved the comparisons with the porcelain doll- the "glass case of expectations" is such a good way of putting it. I'm looking forward to her escape...

Amazing chapter as always! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I have a hard time writing humor so I'm glad it made you laugh ;D
Yay! You are basically the sweetest. Haha yeah I kind of had fun imagining what their mother would be like - I think I could almost write a whole story about her and the previous generation. That would be kind of fun, actually. Anyway, she sounds like one scary mama.
The porcelain doll line was my favorite line, so it means a lot to me that you liked it :D I think Andromeda is looking forward to her escape too hehehe.
Thank you so much! I can't wait for you to read more!

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