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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi, Elphaba here with your requested review!

I really, really like how you show the bond between Sirius and infant Harry, and how you use Sirius's memories to develop that bond. I like, for instance, that the memory of he and James becoming blood brothers enhances the godfather/godson connection.

Although I understand that the story is mainly about the connection between Sirius and James, I would have liked to see the actual conversation between them and Remus about being a werewolf. That's just me, though. :)

One small grammar issue: I think during detention they would use a "scraper" to "scrape" off the gum -- unless this use of "scrapper" is a Britishism that I'm just not familiar with. :)

You asked me to tell you how this story makes me feel, and honestly, it gives me a warm feeling. It is very sad at the beginning, but the effect of the memories and the bond between Sirius and Harry is very warm and positive. This moment between Harry and Sirius is, surprisingly, not something that I can really recall reading, so, WOW, I'm really glad you wrote it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I greatly appreciate it!

I am glad that I was able to pull off showing the bond between James and Sirius. I could probably have expanded it to show more of Remus, but like you said it was more about James and Sirius. I am happy to hear that it gave you a warm feeling despite the emotion that goes along with the story.

*facepalm* grammar...ugh. =) It's not a britishism that I am aware of either! ;) I will make a change to that and thanks for pointing it out.

Thank you for the review and for the awesome feedback.

-SR17


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