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Review:pennyardelle says:
Hey! I saw your link in the status updates, and thought I would come read and review. I was intrigued, since you don't see too many stories about Moody--and then, when I saw the summary and realized it was about his life when he was imprisoned, I was even more curious.

I liked all the tension in this chapter, and my favourite part was probably the italicized and parenthesized (word?) sentences that contained all the Moody-isms, so to speak. You seem to have captured him very well. :) My only thought was that it felt like it was a bit long at times, like the tension and action was getting lost in some of the explanatory parts (although those were interesting). Very good opening chapter, though!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the surprise review! I really appreciate your comments.

I haven't seen too many stories about Moody either and none about his imprisonment (though it can definitely be difficult to create a story out of a man who's under the Imperius curse).

I'm glad that you liked the tension in the chapter as well as the Moody-isms. It's great to hear that you think that I captured him well since he's different from the characters I've written before.

Thanks for pointing that out! I don't find action scenes very easy to write since I always feel like it's lacking in description... I'll go back and see where I can shorten the description.

Once again, thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it!

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