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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh how sad! I really felt for Albus in this and hated what Fred and Leanne had done to hime.. thats just horrible! It makes it so much worse when one considers that now Albus has to watch Leanne on his cousin's arm at all the family get togethers and as we can see from this.. it really isn't going to be that easy for him to just forgive and forget. It also makes it worse that Fred was trying to comfort Albus after the break up and then for Albus to find out that the other guy she wanted was his own cousin! Thats like throwing salt onto an open wound! I really enjoyed this piece I thought it was well done and well written. There was one place towards the end where you used the word quickly twice in one sentence and I think it would work better if you replaced or got rid of one of them. That was the only spot that I found anything that seemed to break up the flow a little bit and didn't find any other mistakes so great job on that! Again I really enjoyed it and thought you did a wonderful job with his emotions! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that you liked this and thought that it was well written that makes me really happy.
Whoops thanks for pointing that out, I shall go back and edit that out soon. Thank you once again :-D

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