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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Dear Steven,
I have the explanation on how to fix things with Lucy. TELL HER YOU LOVE HER!
Love, Julie

SERIOUSLY. I want things to get better. Mary is scary! (that rhymes!) I'm really sad that Lucy seems to be so happy around Harold but I'm going to hope it's all a lie and she is miserable just like Steven!

Who did he think he was? A comedian? - oh bless his heart for this line. Jealousy has a way of rearing its ugly head.. Poor Steven!

I still love how awkward he is. And how much he failed at getting detention.. it was so pathetic but still adorable and humorous. He needs Lucy's help!!

Worst timing ever! No! Steven, you're supposed to be kissing Lucy, not Mary!

Even though it was a bad day for Steven I still loved this chapter and his awkwardness so dearly. WRITE MORE :D

*hugs* I'll talk to you soon dear!


Author's Response: Haha he has read your letter and has written a response.
Dear Julie,
Thank you for the explanation, it's hard to do that when Harold is always in the way. I would tell Lucy I love her but then that would mean me admitting out loud that I have feelings for her and I'm just too scared to at the moment.
Love Steven.
P.S. how did you know where I was?

Hehe :-D She is scary, I fear her. Ahh with Lucy I think she's trying to make Steven jealous and it is working. She'll finally talk to Steven in the next chapter she needs to help him get rid of the nut job :-D
Oh Steven is very jealous haha I'm glad you liked the pathetic attempt at him getting a detention haha that was fun to write.
Oh Steven didn't even want to kiss Mary haha, poor him I think Mary totally planned it so Lucy would see.
I am going to write more soon my lovely! *hugs* yay! I hope you're ok! x

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