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Review:HappyMollyWeasley says:
Hi!

This is HappyMollyWeasley here with your review.

This is a story that is truely different from most of the stories here. I was a little bit surprised by it, but I think it is great to find that not all next-gen stories are of that typical "sweet seventeen, not a worry in the world except for the boy to like me" sort. ;-)

I like the poetic language you use, and the rather abrupt (intentionally, I think?) change to everyday language. By those changes you describe how mixed up an confused Rose really is. She is torn between her inner chaos and horror and the ordinary world around her.

It is hard to grasp what have happened to her, and how she ended up like this, but it is easy to understand how she is feeling at this point.

I like the suggestive parts in italics. Creepy, but well-written.

Overall I have to say that this is a story that I will remember, and that you have done a great job with it. :-)

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing!

I'm glad it was different! You know, I do like those well-written "sweet seventeen, last year at Hogwarts" stories, but I like to do something different, something artsy.

Yes, that is definitely intentional - it's to show the dichotomy between Rose's situation and emotional turmoil and the fact that everyone else's lives go on. I'm so glad you caught onto the inner chaos and horror of her life - such a wonderfully perceptive reviewer! I love it!

Yes, it is hard to grasp and intentionally so - victims don't just tell you what happened to them, not most, anyway. They are so utterly confused and desperate - that's what I was trying to convey.

Thank you so much! I do hope you enjoyed the read, and I really appreciate the lovely review! :)


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