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Review:starryskies55 says:
This was a good first chapter, I liked how you quickly identified Albus' fears and his animosity towards his brother :P It was quite funny! Meeting Scorpius was nicely done as well- and he didn't want to duel *rolls eyes at James*. Teaser. :P

CC- some of your sentences are a little long, and that tends to give a rambling impression. Sometimes simple sentences are good! :D

Great chapter overall :)

Author's Response: Thank-you for the review. This story does still have some rough edges because of the way I originally wrote it, I appreciate your input on this.

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