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Review:starryskies55 says:
This was wonderful. The language of the piece really fitted well with the time, at least for me. The dialogue was very good (and it is hard to write period dialogue, I've tried :P)

I liked the characterisations you've started- the start, with the descriptions of Marianne's family and the business and how she discovered her magic- it was unbelievably cute and I loved it. It's also pretty reminiscent of some older books that I've read- the style you've written in, I mean.

It's really interesting to see the Founders as teachers, and to see students with at least some degree of familiarity with them- as they were just 'professors'. :p

Overall, I liked this a lot. You're off to a fantastic start! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! Dialogue is really interesting for me to figure out.

That's what I was going for, so I'm glad you liked it!

My idea is that this is sort of near the end of the founders at hogwarts--ie their deaths, salalzar's leaving, whatever I decide actually happens. So things have changed a bit, and the students see the founders more as just regular teachers, though they still honor them. Hope that made sense!

Thanks again, I really appreciate it! And sorry for taking a while to reply!


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