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Review:missclaire17 says:
this was so brilliant!
ieven though in the beginning of Lily's hogwarts career, it had been Petunia and Snape's fault why petunia ended up acting so horrible to lily, I can see why Petunia resents Lily in the last scene, when Lily was talking about fighting in the War. It would be so difficult to hear your BRILLIANT sister talk on and on about things that you dont understand and have her reference you to things you dont understand, meanwhile, your parents just keep looking on and dont do anything to intervene.

on the other hand, I like seeing Petunia's thoughts about Harry and the War and everything. It was always Vernon who was so evil while Petunia just sort of sat in the background, really only caring for Dudley. I liked seeing that Petunia really regretted not saying anything to Harry while she had the chance because I don't think Petunia is anywhere near as evil as Vernon is.

Of course if I was Lily, I would be angry at Petunia for letting Vernon be so horrible to Harry, but this inside look to Petunia, which I believe Lily would be able to see from wherever she is, really tells a lot about Petunia and her regrets.
Even if Petunia doesnt specifically say it, it's almost evident that she feels regret and wants to redo some things over.

I love this one-shot because I think you depicted Petunia beautifully, putting her in a more sympathetic view that makes the readers understand where she is coming from, yet you don't completely absolve Petunia from her previous faults.

This was amazing. 10/10

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