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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hey! Tag you're it :P Not really review tag doesn't work that way but oh well.

I love Lily and James and I have read an absurd amount of fanfiction based on them. For me, this story was lovely. It outlined why they needed each other a lot more that most Lily/James stories which just point out the love/hate part. I don't think they hated each other as much as people seem to suggest, they had their moments.

I think this is a really unique way of getting them together as well. Not the normal shoving in a broom cupboard story, although there is something addicting about those.

The only thing that bothered me is she calls him James a lot. Not that her using his name is the problem, it just doesn't feel like natural dialogue.

"Voldemort has to be stopped and I will lay my life down before joining his crew or allowing them to live." James announced as he stopped in his place, looking at me. I really loved this, personally I think you captured James in that one section. It still showed them misunderstanding each other without them screaming at each other. It was very nicely done.
All in all, a really good Lily/James story.


Author's Response: I'm so glad that that one part really caught your attention and made you still see them not understanding each other but not yelling at each other. this was written as a christmas present last year and I'm so glad that so many people are really enjoying it! I'm glad that you felt it was an original way to get them together and not something that is seen a lot. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!


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