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Review:accioHPFF says:

YAY! I really enjoyed this first chapter!

I really like that you decided to start it with another family gathering, as it was really nice how you described all of the interactions and relationships since the end of Just Rose.

I'm also insanely curious about what Hugo is up to, already! Hopefully you won't keep us all in suspense too long there, because I'm nosey. :P Although you said nothing illegal... That's definitely a good start. :D

I really like the way you managed to weave in other people's back stories, like Matthew being an only child, or how you introduced Lucy's plans. It seemed really naturally placed :)

Awesome job, I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Fargle xD

Thank you SO much for the review. Hugo... all will be revealed. Naturally I'll have to work out the details myself first, but it's all there in my head somewhere.

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