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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh this chapter is rather sweet! I loved the two different looks at things.. one from the werewolfs eye and the other from remus! It just makes me so happy that he has friends like these guys who still want to be friends with him and wanted to do whatever it took to help him out during the full moon. I thought you did a good job with the emotions in this chapter as well and covered all the bases for them too! I'm so glad that Remus didn't actually hurt anybody no matter how hard his werewolf side tried to. Also I like the idea that Sirius is really the one that figured it all out.. and by a book no less but that they all kind of played a part in figuring it out. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Heya!

Remus and Wolf are very similar and at the same time, very different. Wolf, in my head, has become a separate entity, though so he's fun to write. The Marauders in this chapter were definitely fun though! Specially the banter between James and Sirius. And trust me, I laughed at myself that Sirius managed to gather information from a book as well! But McGonagall did point out that they were very bright. I tried to bring that forth in this chapter along with them being mischievous.

Thank you for your review! :D

--Rosie


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