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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
It's just... so... sad! I'm just... this story breaks my heart! Because Aria is right - she and James ARE perfect for each other. They both have huge, glaring flaws, but they just... work. But things are sucky and they aren't together and it just makes me sad.

Don't get me wrong, I love this story. I love angst and this story definitely has a lot of that. But it just... makes me sad. I'm sad!

Oh, Jett. He's cute and wondeful and a great guy and... and... he likes Aria but he shouldn't! I can't even express how depressed this makes me! It's such an amazing person, but he's so hung up on Aria, who is in love with James, that he can't be happy. It just breaks my heart. He needs to find himself a nice new girl. No one deserves a happily ever after more than Jett.

Aria is really annoying me. I mean, I feel sorry for her - like, REALLY sorry for her - but she is just so bad at confrontation. She buckles under pressure and while my heart is, like, crying for her, at the same time, I just want to slap some sense into her. She needs to tell Alex to go sit on a duck, tell Jett she's not interested so he can move on, and somehow be with James so they can live happily ever after instead of being constantly miserable without each other! Gah! I NEED things to be fixed! You just make me so upset, woman!

But on the brighter side, I'm happy to see Dom, Al, and Louis back. Especially the boys. I really missed them.

Oh, Alex. I love him and hate him all at once. He's just... so awful. And I hate how he's constantly manipulating Aria and James and everyone. But he's just such a good "villian" that I can't help but respect him, you know? Or is that just me?

Impatiently (and also nervously) awaiting the next update!

-Laura

Author's Response: I know... I wrote it... :P Aria and James just... work. And it doesn't make sense, but they just /do/. You know? Which is why this story is so sad at the moment :(

I know! I know you're sad! Everyone's sad! I'm sad! I need to write some fluff soon :/

Jett. Jett, Jett, Jett. A lot of people don't like him for some strange reason. He's not bad... he's just confused. He really does need to get over her, or just open his eyes and realize that she's not into him. It's kind of obvious. But he should definitely be happy - I agree with you there.

Ahaha, Aria is really annoying me as well. You're exactly right - she has no confrontational skills. Which is really not good, and she needs to work on that. She has a lot of things about herself that she needs to fix. By the way, what exactly does "go sit on a duck" mean? I've never heard that... GAH! IT'S NOT MY FAULT! DON'T BE MAD AT ME!

Yaay :) At least you found some happiness in this chapter :D

Ahaha, I think I actually love Alex the most out of all my characters. He's so... Alex. He's a lot of fun, he really is. I totally get what you mean about "respecting" him. He's just that kind of character that you love to hate.

No, don't be nervous! I will tell you that the next chapter is slightly less depressing ;)

Thank you sooo much for the lurve-ly review ♥

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