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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi again!

Of the three sisters, Narcissa seems the most traditional, which definitely fits with the way things turn out in the books.

Her misinterpretation of the events she witnesses (Bella's "flirting," the quirk to Andromeda's mouth) make this chapter very funny, but I like that she also does have one insightful observation: "...if you don't start actually searching for a husband soon, Mother will just pick one for you."

I also love that her laps around the dance floor are measured out in fantasies.

Wow, I haven't found anything to nit-pick over in any of these chapters. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this story so far and have added it to my favorites. I'll definitely be back to read the rest!

Author's Response: Hehehe yes, Narcissa is a stickler for the Black family rules, which made it quite fun to write her (:
Thank you thank you thank you! You're probably sick of me saying this to you now, but I really appreciate your reviews. AND you've favorited this, which is just unbelievably flattering. I hope future chapters won't disappoint!


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