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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi, Elphaba here with your requested review!

First of all, I THOUGHT that I recognized the first sentence, but didn't pick up on the "Black Beauty" reference until I read your author's note. :) I think you used the quote very well, and especially like that the book title also works so well for your story.

I love this sentence: "Black, brown, and yellow: three different colours, but all Black, as Bella used to say." It reveals a seldom-seen tender side to Bellatrix. The only time I remember seeing this in the series is when she goes with Narcissa to Spinner's End, so I can definitely believe that she would share a close bond with her sisters -- until Andromeda runs off with a muggleborn, anyway.

I really like how you handle the forbidden romance aspect of the story, with the reference to Cinderella and Andromeda rolling her eyes because she isn't familiar with muggle fairy tales. "We don't have forever yet" makes me think that Andromeda has already made up her mind, and is just waiting for the right moment.

Since this chapter is short and I enjoyed it so much that I went on to read the next one right away...


Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews! I couldn't stop smiling when I read them :D I'm so glad you liked my use of the quote; I was a little worried that it didn't flow but, so far, no one's complaining so I guess that's good haha.
It might just be my own love for my sisters shining through, but I definitely think all three of the Black sisters would've been at least a little close - before everything happened. They weren't born hating each other, that's for sure ;)
So happy you like this...thanks so much!

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